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The surprise ending makes the story interesting and it makes the read want to read it. If you had a boring story with no surprise ending no one would want to take the time to read it. You always was something surprising in your stories. “I was never kinder to the old man than during the whole week before I killed him”. “Here! Here! Is the beating of the old mans hideous heart”. It the first quote, he’s telling you that he was very rude and mean to the old man but then the week he wanted to kill him, he wanted to be very nice and kind to him. In the second quote he’s describing the heartbeat of the old man when he heard it with his own two ears. Surprise ending is one of my favorites because it always gets you wondering.
really good, and you are right about the suprise ending :)))
ReplyDeletethank you :)))
ReplyDeletewow i really like your quotes :)
ReplyDeletekeep up the good work
thank you emily!!!<3(:
ReplyDeleteI really like it but u said "You always was something surprising in your stories." ....You said, you was something instead of want
ReplyDelete^^ oh ya! just noticed that! :o. :)
ReplyDeletethanks guys!(:
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