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Do you like the kind of stories where they have a twisted, demented, creepy theme? If you are this kind of person, then this is a story that you would like. The story of Tell Tale Heart by Edgar Allen Poe, The story of a crazed man. It is a story about a demented man that wants to kill an old man. The old man never did anything wrong to the other man. The only reason he wanted to kill him was because of his eye. The eye bugged the man because he said it looked like a vulture.
make your hook a little more intersting. :)
ReplyDeletei like it good job :)
ReplyDeleteIt was good nice vocab.... you used demented twice though
ReplyDeletegood start
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ReplyDeletekeep up the good work ok.