Intro Paragraph:
Thesis sentence: Tell-Tale Heart by Edgar Allen Poe, displays a dark, mysterious mood, a amazing surprise ending, and a interesting plot.
First Body Paragraph: Mood
“I put in a dark lantern, all closed, closed that so no night shone out”
“His room was black as pitch with the thick darkness”
Second Body Paragraph: Surprise Ending
“I was never kinder to the old man than during the whole week before I killed him”
‘Villains!” I shrieked, “Dissemble no more!”
Third Body Paragraph: Plot
“I head all things in the heaven and in the earth”
“I loved the old. He never wronged me”
WOW! GREAT ESSAY! ;)
ReplyDeletethat was cool but your intro paraghraph was a little short
ReplyDeleteyour intro paragraph is very good, i like the use of interesting words that describe the story
ReplyDeleteGreat job, i luv the quotes you picked!
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