Wednesday, October 27, 2010

the poe poe (intro and first body paragraph)

Menegos Jacob
10/26/10
So far this year we have read at least 4 stories and out of those 4 stories my favorite was Tell-Tale Heart. My favorite was Tell-Tale Heart because it was very interesting and it kept me wanting to read more. The ending was very shocking and when i finished it made me want to read it again. It first starts when this crazy old man has a neighbor with a messed up eye and he hates it and he thinks the only way of making the eye go away is by killing him! In the end the guy goes nuts and tells the police were he hid the body. The police were shocked to find the body under the floor boards, they were even more shocked when they found out that he did it. Tell-Tale Heart, by Edgar Allen Poe has descriptive figurative language, suspense, and a shocking conclusion.



3 comments:

  1. your grammar is funny(: maybe check it? but other than that i like it(:

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  2. have to make the hook more intence but i have to say it has some really good dscription

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  3. wow you did a good job describing the story.
    great work

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