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Little Shirley Temple never had a worry in the world. It was Shirley herself who said, "You've got to S-M-I-L-E to be H-A-Double-P-Y". Although she was happy for a very long time doing her movies and TV shows, she wanted to get down to business. Shirley was 21 in 1949 when she starred in her last film, A Kiss for Corliss. She also acted in her television show from 1958 until 1963 at the age 35. You should include a sentence that says something about her being in the government. Shirley Temple had an interesting background, played an influential role in the United States, and impacted our world. great thesis

Shirley Jane Temple was born April 23, 1928, in Santa Monica, California. She was an American film and television actress, singer, dancer, autobiographer, and was a U.S. Ambassador to Ghana and Czechoslovakia. She started her film career at the young age of three, and her cute looks and spunky personality landed her in several movies. Some say it was good luck but Shirley says, “Good luck needs no explanation.”cite where you found this A few movies she was in wereto name are Bright Eyes, Curly Top, and Heidi.underline movie titles She was so popular they began to make dolls, plates, and clothing designed after Shirley. Even Santa Clause asked little Shirley for an autograph. She later commentedThis is what she had to say about that, “I stopped believing in Santa Claus when my mother took me to see him in a department store, and he asked for my autograph."cite this She was a common thing to talk about and watch in a household, because she brought a lot of joy during the great depression. capitalize it and explain in a sentence what it was. Although, as she got older, her popularity decreased and she left the film industry when she was twelve and went to high school. Shirley returned to show business in 1958 and went right into a TV show that lasted two seasons. She also frequently guessedguest starred on other TV shows, but Shirley had bigger plans in life. Even as a kid she was known as the “ambassador of goodwill”. cite this

You need an intro sentence“I ran for Congress, just once.” cite this In 1967, Shirley ran for United States Congress don't underlinebut failed. She was not discouraged though. In 1974, she was appointed United States Ambassador to Ghana, and Czechoslovakia in 1989. She now says, “I work a seventeen hours day, and I'm personally responsible for 108 staff members in the embassy.” cite Also, explain what she did as an ambassador. She was so successful she was in line for many important awards and honors including Kennedy Center Honors don't underlineand a Screen Actors Guild don't underlineLife Achievement Award. She was a great politician. You need to explain what she did that was so great as a politician.

Dedicated to the United States, she was worked with four presidents Richard Nixon who appointed her United States Representative to the United Nations in 1969, for Gerald Ford, she was Ambassador to the Republic of Ghana, for Ronald Reagan she served as a foreign affairs officer with the State Department, and George Bush appointed her Ambassador to Czechoslovakia. this is from a website...where is the citation? Franklin Delano Roosevelt said, "as long as our country has Shirley Temple, we will be all right." She knew so much she began to explain to people, “The U.N. acts as the world's conscience, and over eighty-five percent of the work that is done by the United Nations is in the social, economic, educational and cultural fields.” This whole paragraph is from websites...I don't hear any of your voice. And, you did not cite any of the pages.

As you can see, Shirley Jane Temple has helped our country through good times and bad.You didn't really go into how she helped. During the Great Depression, she brought smiles on our faces and when our country needed help she was by our presidents side with her ideas. She saw the importance of goodwill and a strong government and she will forever be known as the girl who opened her heart and who made a difference in the lives of all who know her.

You have a good conclusion! I would add a couple more sentences to it, though.