persuasive essay

Rob Agerbeek
Persuasive Essay



The Eagles pitcher just got hit in the face by a line drive. What happened to him? These types of injuries happen all the time due to fast bat to ball ratio. You need to explain this to the people reading this. Schools and organizations of baseball talk about this rule all the time. You don’t have a thesis statement? What is your essay about? ***Your intro needs more***

The first solution to this problem is to make bb core baseball bats. These types of bats have a slower bat to ball ratio, which means the hits will not be as hard. I not 1st person agree with this rule but the bats with bb cores sucksuse a synonym for sucks in my opinion, but this means that there will be less injuries. Explain why they don’t work wellWood bats have been used for centuries in baseball. I myself have played in baseball games were we have used wood bats. Although wood bats are common, they are also dangerous. Many people have broken a wood bat and hurt themselves and or another player.How do they hurt…what happens? **You don’t have any quotes***

Another solution to the fast bat to ball ratio is making it mandatory to use bb core baseball bats in high schools. This will help have less injury in high school. People want bb core bats because the boys in high school are pretty big and have a lot of power so this will help a lot. Bb core baseball bats are pretty good they just have less pop on the ball then a normal bat. This paragraph needs two quotes and more info.



Another idea to stop the injuries from normal baseball bats is to use wood baseball bats. Wood baseball bats are good and have nice pop but there are the injury factor. The splitting or snapping of a wood bat is very dangerous. They could split in your hand an puncture it, or break in half and fly and hit another player on the field.what is this paragraph? It should fit with one of your other solution paragraphs.


So please agree with mynot 1st person statements on changing the bat rule to bb core or wood bats. We can change this to help have less injury in baseball. People have been trying to change this for years lets make it start now!Run-on Thanks for listening to my story I hope you agree with me.

You need a paragraph about the history of injury in baseball due to bats.