Monday, November 8, 2010

marks closing

this was a scary dark story and it gives you the horriabe chills so remember if you ever think someones watching you be careful when you go to sleep. so hoped you like my awsome story!
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3 comments:

  1. Tori O. :)November 8, 2010 at 8:10 AM

    markub, i think you should add a little bit more detail. BUT ITS VERY INTENSE!!!!!!!!!!!!((((((:
    and good.

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  2. Nicole. :)November 8, 2010 at 8:17 AM

    check your spelling :) and make it a little longer :) buuut, really good :)

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  3. nicolee rene {:November 15, 2010 at 9:43 AM

    ^^ like nicole said make it longer and check spelling(: oh and make sure it isnt in first person(x

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