Hook : As a student have you ever felt that by using so much paper and material that you were making the world a dump for future years. In one year a school will use at least 7,200 pounds of paper, 18 billion pencils.

 

Comment on Hook with transition:  If we keep following this growth pattern we will soon all be living in our own filth and trash.  So  

 

Thesis statement if I could create a new form of technology to make the classroom a better place, it would be to have programs that allow students to create electronic projects.  That way we can go green and utilize technology in the classrooms. 

 

Intro sentence that explain restates what your technology would be. Paragraph Two: We as Americans have made great advances in technology, such as making computers small enough to fit in a person’s pocket.  In the next couple years there will be no such things as computer lab every class and student will have their own computer. 

Intro sentence that explain restates what your technology would be.

Explain the details of your object.  We could create or find software’s that we could use to create 3d projects.  Because projects that we create for class we go out and buy material that we only use once and then it gets thrown away and put into a landfill.  But by utilizing technology we can create online projects that can be made and then simply be erased.  This way we can introduce kids to the world of global technological communication, and at the same time in a green earth friendly way.

Concluding sentence with transition.

 

Paragraph Three:

Intro sentence that states three ways it could be used in the classroom.  There are many ways these programs can be used in the classrooms, such as making projects, giving assignments, and presenting projects.  The first main purpose of the program would to be the creation of projects.  Students would be able to create the projects digitally.  They would be able to create intriguing projects in half the time and with ought facing the problem of failure during the creation.  The first step of the process would be to learn your assignment.  Every student would have their own account so they could save all their stuff in one place.  On the home page, after being logged in, every student would find a note section in which the teacher controlled.  On this section the teacher could write comments and give the assignments to the students.  Underneath the teacher notes there would be a feedback section, so all the students good critique others projects.  But this would be linked to the teacher page so that no offensive and rude comments would be said to the students without the teacher being notified first.    

Explain the three ways in detail.

Concluding sentence with transition.

 

Paragraph Four:

Intro sentence that states three ways it would help the teachers and students.

Explain the ways in detail.

Concluding sentence.

 

Paragraph Five:

Restate thesis.

Restate why your technology will help our future of education briefly.

Broad statement about how education needs technology.